Selective Pressure: Page 6

 

Note 1I don't like verbal sound effects. It's hard to put them on the page so it doesn't block what is making the sound! I'm also not a good letterer. I needed some impact though since it is a tank slamming into the ground. Note 2I wanted to make the Exosuit look different in each time period so the reader can figure it out more easily. For the 2008 model I took what we've seen already and made it dorkier. The head is a weird Juggernaut/bicycle helmet. The limbs look like they're made out of tinkertoys. Note 3Even though I don't like them, this page really works the sound effects! Note 4Keeley makes her grand appearance (though she appeared above too (also, it's later revealed that she has a bigger role!)). I like the character so much, she just had to show up.